English Tutorial

I thought that overall the Post was very interesting and to the point, however some details and points should've been pointed out that was left out. The assignment was to basically answer the questions that the Professor asked...all of the questions were answered but in different order, but this is a minor problem. The author information seemed to be the main subject at a certain point and I know when writing about something that you know a lot about, you want to add every information that you know about that subject, but the focus should be there as to when to stop and what it important to be in the piece you are writing. The Conclusion was too detailed and specific...it should have been more generalized.